This page is dedicated to analyze my quarter and my progress towards the course's objective.
Planning and Exploratory Writing
week 2 exploratory writing.
I have learned most of the techniques covered this quarter in high school. This course has been like a review and a transition to a higher level writing course.
The assignment was to watch and find timestamps where characters show how they were taught of gender roles. The screenshot I took were my timestamps and analyzations for Belle.
Beauty and the Beast Analyze
Peer Review
To the left is one of the best review I gave to a peer. This corresponds to one of our course objectives of improving peer reviewing skills.
This is the one of the best feedback I got from our peer review so far. This person gave me specific aspects that I can and should be working on.
Self Review
This part of the assignment was to predict what I would need to change the most before reading it.
This part of the assignment was to actually list them out after proofreading my essay. My predictions fairly align with my results aside from some minor logic flaws here and there.
Revision
The screenshot on the left is the hook to one of my paragraphs. It is logically flawed initially.
The screenshot on the right is the edited hook to one of my paragraphs. It is now logical.
